boypisces's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chris And David 2| Halo!]

I'm going to base this on the fact that you seem new at animation and that you have the potential to improve. The comedy was okay in parts, although a heavy reliance on memes and slapstick should be avoided in my opinion. The animation was mostly stiff but this is something I feel was not a huge issue and you can work on. All in all not terrible but needs a great deal of work.

MicroMashons responds:

I've been animating for about a year. I started this in March and worked on it on and off. This script is a year old and I've written the next Chris and David and I think I fixed most of those problems. The animation was mostly tweening, because the Halo armor was a complex thing for me to control without tweening. that explains the stiffness. I agree though, I look at the script and realized what I've improved on. But I still think it's entertaining. Thanks for the comment.

[Zone vs Randy]

Bit short, but well animated. Would like to have seen more done with this as I had no idea what the hell was going on and if you did a backstory to these characters if you were willing to carry it on, then that'd be great :)

FurryZA responds:

Well, I still have to make the backstory to the wolf, gray character, however the yellow haired character is not mine, and he has his own little thing going on there because.. well... it's his schtick ^^; I can't make something if I don't have permission, y'know?

With that being said, I do appreciate the comment, and the fact that you took time out to look at this animation. will be sure to put more thought into what i do with my animations in the future, so that they may be longer and more indepth on how it's going to go.

[Madness Corruption]

Whilst not amazing it accomplished what it went out to do. It's very madness-esque and I like how humour and different art styles were brought into it. Some submissions were better than others but hey, its a collab its never going to be perfect. Good job though :)

Djjaner responds:

thanks..

[Halo In A Nutshell]

I'm not going to base this review off of personal opinion as I felt that halo reach was one of the best halo's to come out, (excluding halo CE that games a damn masterpiece). The artwork in this animation was quite well done, the animation was good for what it was although more movement could have been added. It was quite short, but it was sweet, the humour was a bit cheesy but not enough to make me stop watching and the voice acting was not bad at all. Overall it was quite good, just add some more movement to stop the characters looking too stiff and it'll be awesome.

JGNation responds:

This sounds like the major consensus of everyone so I will definitely add more movement in my next animation!

[Monobrow Romance]

Great!

Animation and drawing were good! well good for your first animation anyway. What you need to work on is body movement, it looks too slow, like when he's walking, the sound quality needs improving as well, it's really quiet when you speak and I can hear the feedback from the mic. But besides that it was an alright animation well done!

mattyBtheAnimator responds:

Thanks alot...i will take note of all the useful advice and hopefully my next one is alot better

[A Goomba's life Ep 3]

Not bad.

For a sprite animation I really enjoyed watching that, the humour was alright and so was the voice acting. The animation wasn't brilliant but it looked nice.

DemonicDragon93 responds:

Thanks i'm glad you enjoyed it

[Go Farm III advert]

Um..

While I liked the song, this was way too short, hardly any animation and it felt like you could have added a whole lot more to it.

rhys510 responds:

yeh i know what you mean about the animation but its an advert its not ment to be long :L