boypisces's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spoiler]

Not bad, the pacing and delivery of the punchline was pretty good, got a chuckle from me. For as far as a short goes, it was well done.

Chauder responds:

Thank you :)

[Guice & Mikey Go To Bdubs]

Can't say the animation was that great, I get the story and the joke but it wasn't that funny. It kept my attention I guess, but it wasn't that good.

[Dance, Magic Dance!]

Just a boring loop with little to no actual purpose.

[Chris And David 2| Halo!]

I'm going to base this on the fact that you seem new at animation and that you have the potential to improve. The comedy was okay in parts, although a heavy reliance on memes and slapstick should be avoided in my opinion. The animation was mostly stiff but this is something I feel was not a huge issue and you can work on. All in all not terrible but needs a great deal of work.

MicroMashons responds:

I've been animating for about a year. I started this in March and worked on it on and off. This script is a year old and I've written the next Chris and David and I think I fixed most of those problems. The animation was mostly tweening, because the Halo armor was a complex thing for me to control without tweening. that explains the stiffness. I agree though, I look at the script and realized what I've improved on. But I still think it's entertaining. Thanks for the comment.

[Zone vs Randy]

Bit short, but well animated. Would like to have seen more done with this as I had no idea what the hell was going on and if you did a backstory to these characters if you were willing to carry it on, then that'd be great :)

FurryZA responds:

Well, I still have to make the backstory to the wolf, gray character, however the yellow haired character is not mine, and he has his own little thing going on there because.. well... it's his schtick ^^; I can't make something if I don't have permission, y'know?

With that being said, I do appreciate the comment, and the fact that you took time out to look at this animation. will be sure to put more thought into what i do with my animations in the future, so that they may be longer and more indepth on how it's going to go.

[Ice Cream & Burrito]

Not bad, I did laugh when he took a bite out of him and the joke wasn't played out too much. Art and animation were good, nothing spectacular but it was nice to look out. Good job man :)